Conducted by screenwriter and script consultant Dave Trottier, this unique and newly-revised program is devoted to developing a completed script in a relaxed and nurturing atmosphere. The individual guidance and direction you will receive can save you time, headaches and money, as well as improve your work and reveal its commercial potential.

Step 1 – Concept and core story. You will begin by submitting three story ideas. Once you have developed one clear story (beginning, middle, and end) that you love, then we move on to Step 2.

Step 2 - Character and story development. You will be asked to write a treatment (or synopsis) and develop each of your main characters. Dave has designed exercises to help you deepen your characters and story.

Step 3 - First 20 pages. In this step, we make sure your scenes are working (in terms of characterization, motivation, story logic, etc.) and that you understand formatting, a crucial issue.

Step 4 - Completed draft. This is the equivalent of Dave's Master Evaluation & Consultation.

These critiques would normally cost you significantly more under any other circumstances. You receive professional evaluations from Dave throughout the writing process. In addition, you will have the motivation to finish your script and learn from the process.

Here are some answers to often-asked questions.

What does each evaluation include? Besides pointing out problem areas in structure, character, dialogue, theme, etc., suggestions will be made on how to improve your work. If you're having trouble with certain concepts or principles or techniques, they will be explained to you. Certain readings may be suggested to clarify points. You may be asked to rewrite certain scenes or be given special assignments. There is no extra charge for this. Everything is personalized for you.

How long will it take me to complete my script? In most cases, it will take about five months writing part-time, but you may proceed at your own pace since this is a personalized, pay-as-you-write program. You will be guided through every phase of the writing process, including the all-important initial stages where most writers make their biggest mistakes. Most of all, you'll have the satisfaction of having written the best script you can.

Is there anything else to buy? Naturally, you will cover the cost of your own postage and of any phone calls. If you don't already own the fourth edition of The Screenwriter's Bible, you will want to purchase a copy. The Bible consists of a complete primer, an updated formatting guide, a workbook with guidelines and over 150 questions to check your progress, a spec writing guide, a marketing plan, and a resource directory. There is no requirement to buy anything else.

Who is my mentor and what are his qualifications? Dave Trottier is a produced screenwriter, film producer, and script consultant with more than a decade of experience. His clients and students include two Nicholl winners. All evaluations will be made personally by Dave in writing.

What if I want to talk to Dave personally? His phone number is 801-492-7898. If you need a clarification of a critique or just want to ask a question, feel free to call. Assignments may be submitted via email or sent hard copy through the mail.

What if I already have a script written and only need an analysis of the completed draft? See Dave's current fee schedule for completed and partial scripts, treatments, and query letters.  This four-step course is designed for people just starting a script.

How much does it cost? Only $195 per step. You may drop out anytime or take as long as you'd like to complete each step. You are in control of the process. See "How to Get Started" below for more details.

HOW TO GET STARTED

To get started today, send your check or money order for $195 (for Step 1) to Dave Trottier or e-mail your VISA/Mastercard information to Dave. Add $23 if you do not already own the fourth edition of The Screenwriter's Bible. To order by VISA or MasterCard, simply send your credit card information along with your signature. You will be sent your course materials within a week or two.

Thereafter, you pay only $195 before each of the remaining three steps. That way, you can write (and pay) at your own speed. You may drop out of the program any time you wish—there is no obligation to continue or make future payments. All payments that you make are non-refundable.

Dave Trottier
4456 Manchester Street
Cedar Hills, UT  84062